You travelled on plane some days back lost your bag. Though you field your claim to Lost and Found department you have not received your bag. In your letter - write the details of incident - inquire the status of your lost bag to airline - tell what you want if the bag is not found

Dear Sir or Madam, I am
writithis
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writing
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this letterbto
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letterbto
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letter to
draw your immediate attention
about
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to
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my
complain
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complaint
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. I travel
through
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from
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Mumbai to Torontobby
yoir
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your
airline on 1st July
,
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2024. My PNR Is 1266EJ.
However
, I
reqched
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arrived
on
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at
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the Toronto airport on time and
waiting
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waited
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for my bagvat
caroused
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arrive
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. I waited for 30 minutes but
afterthat
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after that
I realised whether my
bag
is
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was
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lost or misplaced.
Thus
, I
sudden
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went to the "Lost and Found " department and registered my
complain
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complaint
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. I want to let you know that my
bag
was in red colour and it was
a
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American Tourister trolley
bag
.
Moreover
, on the upper side
handle
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handle,
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there was a blue colour tag with my name and contact number.
Therefore
, you can easily
found
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find
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it and
recognised
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recognise
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it. It
jas
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has
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been a
wesimce
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while since
I complained about my
bag
.
However
, there is no reply from your side. I want full money back as per claim if you are unable to find my
bag
. I look
forwand
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forward
to your speedy reply on
this
matter. Yours Faithfully, Ziva Shah.
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Task Achievement
Pay more attention to spelling and typing, such as minor errors like 'writithis' instead of 'writing this', 'reqched' instead of 'reached', 'caroused' instead of 'carousel', and 'jas' instead of 'it has' which can hinder readability.
Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure the letter follows a clear and logical structure. Your paragraphs contain single ideas but could be better organized for a smoother flow. For example, the details of the incident and description of the bag should be in separate paragraphs.
Task Achievement
The letter addresses all required points: details of the incident, inquiry about the status of the bag, and what you want if the bag isn't found.
Task Achievement
The tone of the letter is polite and suitable for formal communication, which is important for task fulfillment.
Coherence and Cohesion
The greeting and closing of the letter are appropriately used, positively contributing to the overall tone of the letter.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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