You travelled on plane some days back lost your bag. Though you field your claim to Lost and Found department you have not received your bag. In your letter - write the details of incident - inquire the status of your lost bag to airline - tell what you want if the bag is not found

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am

writithis

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writing

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this letterbto

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letterbto

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letter to

draw your immediate attention

about

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complain

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complaint

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. I travel

through

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from

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Mumbai to Torontobby

yoir

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your

airline on 1st July

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apply

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2024. My PNR Is 1266EJ.

However

, I

reqched

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arrived

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the Toronto airport on time and

waiting

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waited

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for my bagvat

caroused

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arrive

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. I waited for 30 minutes but

afterthat

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after that

I realised whether my

bag

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was

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lost or misplaced.

Thus

, I

sudden

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suddenly

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went to the "Lost and Found " department and registered my

complain

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complaint

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. I want to let you know that my

bag

was in red colour and it was

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American Tourister trolley

bag

Moreover

, on the upper side

handle

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handle,

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there was a blue colour tag with my name and contact number.

Therefore

, you can easily

found

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find

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it and

recognised

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recognise

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it. It

jas

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has

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been a

wesimce

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while since

I complained about my

bag

However

, there is no reply from your side. I want full money back as per claim if you are unable to find my

bag

. I look

forwand

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forward

to your speedy reply on

this

matter. Yours Faithfully, Ziva Shah.

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Task Achievement

Pay more attention to spelling and typing, such as minor errors like 'writithis' instead of 'writing this', 'reqched' instead of 'reached', 'caroused' instead of 'carousel', and 'jas' instead of 'it has' which can hinder readability.

Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure the letter follows a clear and logical structure. Your paragraphs contain single ideas but could be better organized for a smoother flow. For example, the details of the incident and description of the bag should be in separate paragraphs.

Task Achievement

The letter addresses all required points: details of the incident, inquiry about the status of the bag, and what you want if the bag isn't found.

Task Achievement

The tone of the letter is polite and suitable for formal communication, which is important for task fulfillment.

Coherence and Cohesion

The greeting and closing of the letter are appropriately used, positively contributing to the overall tone of the letter.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
23
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

173 words

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Structure your letter

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