The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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causes of using mobile by teenagers in one African country from 2016 to 2019.
Overall
, most of the teenagers used their phones for social networks and sent emails.
However
, the percentages of sent emails and used digital
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decreased over
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time. Teenagers used their cell phones for social
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networks
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half of the main reasons in 2016, and it increased to nearly 56% in 2019.
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email by nearly one quarter in 2016,
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it decreased slightly to 19% in the
last
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had 15% of the main causes in 2016 and 2017,
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increased slightly to 18% in 2018,
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2019
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had
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slightly to 20%.
In contrast
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people
did use their phones for calls, it started only 10% of the main reasons ,
then
this
percentage increased to 13% in 2017 before it dropped significantly to 5% in 2019.
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