The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie graphs illustrate four
differents
causes of using mobile by teenagers in one African country from 2016 to 2019.
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different
Overall
, most of the teenagers used their phones for social networks and sent emails. However
, the percentages of sent emails and used digital camera
decreased over Fix the agreement mistake
cameras
the
time.
Teenagers used their cell phones for social Correct article usage
apply
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networks
exactly
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for exactly
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half of the main reasons in 2016, and it increased to nearly 56% in 2019. Correct article usage
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using
the
email by nearly one quarter in 2016, Correct article usage
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but
it decreased slightly to 19% in the Correct word choice
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last
year.
Digital camera
had 15% of the main causes in 2016 and 2017, Fix the agreement mistake
cameras
then
it
increased slightly to 18% in 2018, Correct pronoun usage
they
by
2019 Correct word choice
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rose
slightly to 20%. Change the verb form
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In contrast
, peopel
did use their phones for calls, it started only 10% of the main reasons , Correct your spelling
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percentage increased to 13% in 2017 before it dropped significantly to 5% in 2019.Submitted by saja.alotaibi on
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