You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1
The pie charts depict information on how families spent their
money
in a particular state between 1950 and 2010.
Overall
, in 1950, the maximum cash was spent on housing,whereas
in 2010, the maximum amount
was spent on food.
To begin
with ,in 1950, a large amount
of money
was spent on housing accounting for 72.2%. The cash used in food and education was 11.2% and 6.6% in 1950 respectively. Furthermore
, 4.4% and 3.3% of the money
was spent on other facilities and transportation,while
in 1950, the lowest amount
of money
was spent on health care .
Conversely
, in 2010 , families spent most of their money
on eating items amounting to 34.0% . A significant amount
of currency was also
used by people on housing accounting for 22.0% in 2010. Families spent approximately 19.2% and 14% of their money
on other amenities and health care respectively. About 6.3 % of cash was used on education.Finally
, in 2010 the minimum amount
spent on transportation was about 4.5%.Submitted by mianraza686 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words money, amount with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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