The two maps illustrate the changes that took place in Hillingford from 2000 to 2015.
Overall
, it can be seen that the town
has undergone a complete transformation and modernization. Originally, the city was probably a small fishing village that has now been reconstructed to become a small tourist metropolis.
The country house in the northwestwest
of the township has been converted into a hotel and the housing near the harbour has been turned into a bed and breakfast accommodation. In the west of the Correct your spelling
northwest west
town
, restaurants, tennis courts and a playground have been built on the site of the field.
The road has also
been extended further
west along the coast. The woods have been chopped down to construct further
housing and flats in the northwestwest
of the Correct your spelling
northwest west
town
. Additionally
, a road has been added to reach these new developments. This
transformation of the town
into a more urban area has also
seen the construction of the train station in the north of the town
.
The school in the southeast of the town
has not changed and the market in the middle east of the town
has been turned into a supermarket.Submitted by janmuldayevaa1 on
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