The two maps illustrate the changes that took place in Hillingford from 2000 to 2015.

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, it can be seen that the

town

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has undergone a complete transformation and modernization. Originally, the city was probably a small fishing village that has now been reconstructed to become a small tourist metropolis. The country house in the

northwestwest

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northwest west

of the township has been converted into a hotel and the housing near the harbour has been turned into a bed and breakfast accommodation. In the west of the

town

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, restaurants, tennis courts and a playground have been built on the site of the field. The road has

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been extended

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west along the coast. The woods have been chopped down to construct

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housing and flats in the

northwestwest

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northwest west

of the

town

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, a road has been added to reach these new developments.

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transformation of the

town

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into a more urban area has

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seen the construction of the train station in the north of the

town

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. The school in the southeast of the

town

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has not changed and the market in the middle east of the

town

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has been turned into a supermarket.

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Jul 21, 2024

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