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The maps below show changes in the town of Hillingford between 2000 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where necessary.

The maps below show changes in the town of Hillingford between 2000 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where necessary.
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The two maps illustrate the changes that took place in
Hillingford
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Wallingford
 from 2000 to 2015.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the
town
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 has undergone a complete transformation and modernization. Originally, the city was probably a small fishing village that has now been reconstructed to become a small tourist metropolis. The country house in the
north
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northwest
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west
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 of the township has been converted into a hotel and the housing near the harbour has been turned into a bed and breakfast accommodation. In the
west
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 of the
town
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, restaurants, tennis courts and a playground have been built on the site of the field. The road has been extended
west
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 along the coast. The woods have been chopped down to construct housing and flats in the
northwest
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northwestwest
west
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 of the
town
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.
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, a road has been added to reach these new developments.
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 transformation of the
town
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 into a more urban area has seen the construction of the train station in the north of the
town
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. The school in the southeast of the
town
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 has not changed and the market in the middle east of the
town
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 has been turned into a supermarket.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, west with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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