The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates how families in certain
nation
spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. There are Fix the agreement mistake
nations
total
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a total
8
spending categories : Change preposition
of 8
food
, housing, fuel and power, clothing and footware
, household goods, personal goods, transport and leisure.
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footwear
Overall
, in 1968 the amount of invested for
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in
food
was the highest one
, recorded 35
%. Change preposition
at 35
However
, after 50 years people used their income to
leisure part most. In both years, Change preposition
for
fuel
and power category is the lowest Correct article usage
the fuel
one
. And the distribution of 1968 was heavily focused on one
categoty
but it Correct your spelling
category
distributed
more evenly in 2018.
In 1968, people used most of the money Add a missing verb
was distributed
into
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on
food
and spent secondly
for
housing, clothing and Change preposition
on
footware
. The percentage gap between the top Correct your spelling
footwear
one
and the next one
is 25%, which is big. In contrast
, the proportion of leisure in 2018 was around 23% which is the highest and spending for housing and food
followed orderly, both figures are between 15% and 20%.Submitted by starmino0113 on
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