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The chart below gives information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart given provides information about the growth of the urban
population
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 in certain regions of the
world
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, containing future predictions.
Overall
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, the
population
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 is increasing all around the
world
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. The populations in all regions rose significantly from 1950 to 2000, and
according to
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 the predictions, they will continue to rise in the future. From 1950 to 2000, the
population
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 has risen in all regions. The
population
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 in Africa, the region that had the least amount of
population
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 in 1950, rose from about 11% to nearly 40%. Meanwhile, in Asia, the
population
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 rose from more than 10% to nearly 40%, equal to the percentage of people in Africa. Latin America, the region having the highest
population
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 rate during 1950, rose from more than 40% to 70%. The increased
population
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 in separate parts has brought the
world
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population
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 up from 30% to 50%. There are predictions of the
population
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 from 2000 to 2030. Asia will have the most
population
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 elevation, with nearly 20% more. Coming second will be Africa, with more than a 10% increase, just more than Latin America with exactly a 10% increase in
population
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. The
world
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population
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 in
this
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 30-year period will continue to rise
as a result
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, but only by more than 10% compared to the approximately 20% in the
last
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 period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, world with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban population
  • future predictions
  • historical data
  • urbanization trends
  • rates of growth
  • developed countries
  • developing countries
  • economic development
  • migration
  • government policies
  • upward trend
  • pace of urbanization
  • catching up
  • comparative analysis
  • regional differences
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