Some people believe that schoolchildren should do their class work individually. Other people believe that sometimes class work should be done in small groups. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In today’s society, it is an increasingly popular topic to discuss whether
school children
should complete their Correct your spelling
schoolchildren
class
Correct your spelling
classwork
work
individually or do it in small groups
. Personally, I agree to a certain extent that schoolchildren
should do their classwork
individually, however
, I feel that there are drawbacks to this
which I will elaborate on further
in this
essay.
Firstly
, schoolchildren
should complete their class work
individually as they can concentrate on their own tasks which enables them to work
productively. For example
, if schoolchildren
are able to work
individually, there will be less
distractions Change the quantifier
fewer
such
as their peers talking to them. It is likely that they could be more focussed
when completing their own tasks, resulting in a faster pace of Correct your spelling
focused
working
, and Replace the word
work
also
working more efficiently without the disturbance of their peers. However
, one
can argue that this
might be detrimental to the development of schoolchildren
as they might be limited from communicating with their peers through small groups
. So, restricting the development of their communication skills. Therefore
, although
we can argue that it could deteriorate the communication skills of schoolchildren
, one
can advocate that it will potentially lead to higher productivity when completing classwork
.
Furthermore
, one
can assert that they should finish their classwork
individually because this
helps develop self reliance
and practise their ability to solve problems on their own. Add a hyphen
self-reliance
For instance
, when they come across a question they don’t know, they can think about it themselves instead
of asking for help and relying on others. Thus
, by working on class work
themselves, it is beneficial to them as they could develop important problem solving
skills. Add a hyphen
problem-solving
On the other hand
, one
can refute the idea that they should work
individually. Instead
, they should work
in small groups
as through working in groups
. This
is because through
group discussions, they could share their ideas. Add the comma(s)
, through
This
would allow them to respect their peer’s perspectives. As a result
, they should work
in groups
. Nevertheless
, one
can dismiss that it restricts them from learning basic manners, one
can agree that there are positive impacts Correct word choice
but one
to
personal development.
In conclusion, there are advantages and disadvantages of completing school Change preposition
on
work
individually. I think that working individually to complete classwork
would be a better choice than working in small groups
as the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.Submitted by cherrychan926 on
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