The chart below gives information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart demonstrates the
raising
proportion of the people living in cities and towns across the globe and Correct your spelling
rising
also
in Africa, Asia and Linking Words
Latin
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America
from past to present and Use synonyms
also
includes the Linking Words
future
forecast.
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Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
urbanisation Linking Words
was
increased in the listed regions throughout the period and Unnecessary verb
apply
in addition
it was estimated to show an upward trend in Linking Words
future
.
In the year 1950, Use synonyms
Latin
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America
was reported with Use synonyms
highest
urban Correct article usage
the highest
population
among all the areas with about 40% Use synonyms
whereas
the entire world's city Linking Words
population
was 10% less Use synonyms
tan
that in Correct your spelling
than
Latin
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America
. After Use synonyms
Correct article usage
the silver
silver jubilee
period, every region was urbanised. Correct your spelling
Silver Jubilee
However
, Linking Words
Latin
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America
, when compared to the entire world whose half of the Use synonyms
population
preferred urban areas, was ahead with about 70% of its citizens residing in towns and citiesUse synonyms
. .
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.
...
This
upward trend was predicted to continue even in the Linking Words
future
and by 2030 about 80% of the Use synonyms
Latin
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America
nationalities would live in urban areas.
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American
In addition
, only one-third of the whole world's urban Linking Words
population
was seen Use synonyms
in
both Change preposition
on
the
continents for the year 1950. Correct article usage
apply
However
, it was augmented during the term and by 2000, their proportion was maximised by four times. Linking Words
Furthermore
, in the Linking Words
future
, Use synonyms
Asian
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the Asian
population
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was
estimated to be above 50% Wrong verb form
is
whereas
half of the African Linking Words
population
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was
forecasted to live in urban Wrong verb form
is
region
.Fix the agreement mistake
regions
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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