The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph demonstrates the proportion of
Britain
population Change noun form
Britain's
owned
one to Correct pronoun usage
who owned
three
or more cars
from the year 1971 to 2007.
Overall
, it is clear that
the single car
holders percentage was stable throughout the period in spite of an increase in the population having more than one car
. However
, the British community with no car
was reduced over time.
In the year 1971, about 45% of the British people owned atleast
a single Correct your spelling
at least
car
. Moreover
, this
division of populace
Correct article usage
the populace
was remained
Change to the active voice
remained
has remained
in
a plateau throughout the duration. Change preposition
at
In contrast
, at
the beginning, about half of the Britishers Change the preposition
in
doesn't
have a Change the verb form
don't
car
atleast
. Correct your spelling
at least
However
, this
section of people were
minimised over the term and Correct subject-verb agreement
was
finally
, only quarter
Correct article usage
a quarter
the
Britain community was reported with no Change preposition
of the
car
by the year 2007.
On the other hand
, some people of
the country Change preposition
in
also
owned
two or more Wrong verb form
own
cars
. Initially
, about one-fourth of the single car
owners , are reported have
two Fix the infinitive
to have
cars
whereas
three
or more than three
vehicles were owned by just 1% of the British. Both these sectors were maximised over the span and at last
, about 5% of the population owned three
or more vehicles whereas
the owners of two cars
equals
the proportion of citizens with no four-wheeler.Change the verb form
equal
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Vocabulary: Replace the words three, cars, car with synonyms.
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