The line graph compares the average number of people in the UK traveling daily by car, bus and train over a period of 60 years.

The line graph compares the average number of people in the UK traveling daily by car, bus and train over a period of 60 years.
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The given line graph provides information on the ratio of people using 3 types of transportation from 1970 year to 2030.
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, there is a clear rising trend of people choosing cars and trains over sixty years. In 1970 the sum of commuters travelling by car was about five, and
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train
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choosers figure was significantly lower, below 3. Throughout these years, numbers are almost identically rising: car travellers reached nine million, as for the
train
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commuters, the figure doubled. At the same time, the amount of
train
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users has been steadily decreasing. During
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time, numbers have dropped from four to 3 less than 3 million. At the beginning of the 2000s, we can see the moment when the number of travellers choosing cars and trains, began to grow,
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at the same time, the sum of
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commuters had declined. In 2010, there was a slight downfall in all types of transportation but it quickly recovered for buses and cars, except for trains, which had a decline through the years.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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