The graph below shows relative price changes for fresh fruits and vegetables, sugars and sweets, and carbonated drinks between 1978 and 2009.
The line graph illustrates the variation in the cost of three commodities(Sugar and Sweets, Carbonated
drinks
and Fresh fruits and vegetables) over the period
of 31 years, from 1978 to 2009. Additionally
, the changes consumer-price
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in the consumer
index
are also
presented which shows correlation
with the mentioned products.
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a correlation
Overall
, it is clear that
the consumer-price index
has steadily inflated throughout the period
. Fruits and vegetables saw the highest rate of fluctuations, while
the remaining two commodities remained steady rose gradually, and stayed lower than the consumer price index
for each period
.
In 1979, the prices
of all the products experienced a 50% surge in prices
, then
between 1981 and 1983, the cost of sweets and drinks
increased slightly(above 100% and nearly 80% respectively). The percentage change in prices
for fresh fruits and vegetables was recorded at 90% in 1985, the price further
fluctuated to nearly 170% after which it continued to increase dramatically, reaching its maximum in 2008 at around 340%.
In contrast
, the prices
for sugar and soft drinks
remained relatively lower than the consumer-price
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consumer price
index
for the given period
. From 1979 up to 1985, the fluctuation remained constant for each of them. By the end of 1985, the prices
for both rose, with sugar increasing considerably while
soft drinks
increased steadily.Submitted by shahroz99dev on
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