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The give graph shows the consumption of fast food in UK (per week) from 1970 to 1990. Write a report for a university lecturer making comparisons where relevant and reporting the main features.

The give graph shows the consumption of fast food in UK (per week) from 1970 to 1990. Write a report for a university lecturer making comparisons where relevant and reporting the main features.
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The line graph illustrates the usage of
pizza
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 ,
hamburgers
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, fish and chips in the UK per week between 1970 and 1990.
Overall
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 , it can be seen that the use of
hamburgers
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, fish and chips showed an upward trend ,
while
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 the consumption of
pizza
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 experienced a downward trend over the period .
To begin
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 with , the amount of fish and chips consumed in 1970 was nearly 200
grams
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 but it rose to approximately 300
grams
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 in 1990 . People mostly ate
hamburgers
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 in the UK over the period .The utilization of hamburger was just about 80
grams
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 in 1970 . In 1975 , it rose slightly to 100
grams
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 .
Moreover
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, the consumption of
hamburgers
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 experienced an increase of 100
grams
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 in each five years until 1990.
Conversely
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 , the utilization of
pizza
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 was 300
grams
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 in 1970.
Furthermore
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, in the next ten years, it reduced to approximately 200
grams
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 . Again , in 1985,
pizza
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 depicted a minor drop in its consumption rate,
whereas
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 , in 1990, the utilization of
pizza
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 remained constant .
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pizza, hamburgers, grams with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption trends
  • dietary preferences
  • steady increase
  • significant drop
  • peak points
  • economic conditions
  • marketing strategies
  • health awareness
  • public health impact
  • cultural shifts
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