You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it.

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Dear Sir/Mme

I'am

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I am

writing

this

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letter because I didn't receive my

suitcase

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and I have still heard nothing from your airline company.

Then

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, in

this

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letter , I

presenting

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present

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what happened and describe my

suitcase

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and what was in it.

Firstly

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, my

suitcase

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small

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smaller

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than other suitcases. It is a black

suitcase

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with a pink line in the middle. In front of the

suitcase

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, I

writed

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wrote

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my name and number phone.

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exist a label "PARIS"

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the left of my name.

Secondly

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, in

this

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suitcase

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, I had my work documents

such

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books

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as books

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and special magazines.

Also

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, I had my

clotheses

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clothes

such

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T-shirt,

underwer

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underwear

pant

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pants

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and shoes. The most important element in my

suitcase

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was my iPad.

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, Sir / Mme, I gratefully ask your help to

found

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find

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suitcase

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. It is urgent for me. If it is possible , I want to receive my

suitcase

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apply

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this

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week. I hope , Sir / Mme , to have

response

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a response

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for

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this

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letter . Yours faithfully Rabeb

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grammar

You may want to proofread your writing carefully to correct minor grammatical errors and spelling mistakes such as 'I writed' which should be 'I wrote', and 'clotheses' which should be 'clothes'.

clarification

Be specific about what actions you expect the airline to take and provide any necessary details that can help them assist you more effectively.

structure

The letter has a clear structure with an introduction, a description of the suitcase, a list of its contents, and a closing request for assistance.

tone

Formal and polite tone is maintained throughout the letter, suitable for addressing an airline.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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7
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

169 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

flight itinerary
baggage claim
missing luggage
distinguishing features
high-value items
sentimental value
compensation policy
alternative measures
regular updates
trace the case
inquire
express dissatisfaction

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

The population of major cities around the world is increasing very fastly. Why is this the case and what measures could be taken to solve this issue.

Nowaday, it is common to have marriage and children in their thirties rather than in younger age. What is cause behind this? Is this a positive or negative trend?

Some people say that all people should stay in full-time education until they are at least 18. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many goverments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other type of progress are equally important for a country Discuss both views and give your own opinion.