You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it.

Dear Sir/Mme
I'am
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I am
writing
this
letter because I didn't receive my
suitcase
and I have still heard nothing from your airline company.
Then
, in
this
letter , I
presenting
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what happened and describe my
suitcase
and what was in it.
Firstly
, my
suitcase
is
small
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smaller
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than other suitcases. It is a black
suitcase
with a pink line in the middle. In front of the
suitcase
, I
writed
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wrote
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my name and number phone.
It
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There
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exist a label "PARIS"
in
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on
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the left of my name.
Secondly
, in
this
suitcase
, I had my work documents
such
books
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as books
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and special magazines.
Also
, I had my
clotheses
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clothes
such
T-shirt,
underwer
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underwear
,
pant
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pants
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and shoes. The most important element in my
suitcase
was my iPad.
Finally
, Sir / Mme, I gratefully ask your help to
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my
suitcase
. It is urgent for me. If it is possible , I want to receive my
suitcase
at
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apply
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this
week. I hope , Sir / Mme , to have
response
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for
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to
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this
letter . Yours faithfully Rabeb
Submitted by rabebhamdi on

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grammar
You may want to proofread your writing carefully to correct minor grammatical errors and spelling mistakes such as 'I writed' which should be 'I wrote', and 'clotheses' which should be 'clothes'.
clarification
Be specific about what actions you expect the airline to take and provide any necessary details that can help them assist you more effectively.
structure
The letter has a clear structure with an introduction, a description of the suitcase, a list of its contents, and a closing request for assistance.
tone
Formal and polite tone is maintained throughout the letter, suitable for addressing an airline.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • flight itinerary
  • baggage claim
  • missing luggage
  • distinguishing features
  • high-value items
  • sentimental value
  • compensation policy
  • alternative measures
  • regular updates
  • trace the case
  • inquire
  • express dissatisfaction
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