You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it.
Dear Sir/Mme
I'am
writing Correct your spelling
I am
this
letter because I didn't receive my suitcase
and I have still heard nothing from your airline company. Then
, in this
letter , I presenting
what happened and describe my Wrong verb form
present
suitcase
and what was in it.
Firstly
, my suitcase
is small
than other suitcases. It is a black Correct word choice
smaller
suitcase
with a pink line in the middle. In front of the suitcase
, I writed
my name and number phone. Correct your spelling
wrote
It
exist a label "PARIS" Correct pronoun usage
There
in
the left of my name.
Change preposition
on
Secondly
, in this
suitcase
, I had my work documents such
books
and special magazines. Change preposition
as books
Also
, I had my clotheses
Correct your spelling
clothes
such
T-shirt, underwer
, Correct your spelling
underwear
pant
and shoes. The most important element in my Fix the agreement mistake
pants
suitcase
was my iPad.
Finally
, Sir / Mme, I gratefully ask your help to found
my Wrong verb form
find
suitcase
. It is urgent for me. If it is possible , I want to receive my suitcase
at
Change preposition
apply
this
week.
I hope , Sir / Mme , to have response
Add an article
a response
for
Change preposition
to
this
letter .
Yours faithfully
RabebSubmitted by rabebhamdi on
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grammar
You may want to proofread your writing carefully to correct minor grammatical errors and spelling mistakes such as 'I writed' which should be 'I wrote', and 'clotheses' which should be 'clothes'.
clarification
Be specific about what actions you expect the airline to take and provide any necessary details that can help them assist you more effectively.
structure
The letter has a clear structure with an introduction, a description of the suitcase, a list of its contents, and a closing request for assistance.
tone
Formal and polite tone is maintained throughout the letter, suitable for addressing an airline.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite