The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework and households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts illustrate the interchange in ownership of electrical gadgets
being
washing Unnecessary verb
apply
machine
, Fix the agreement mistake
machines
refrigerator
and a Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
vacuum
cleaner and length
of time used performing house jobs and households in a single nation in the years from 1920 to 2019.
All three electrical appliances began in 1920 with a rise and continued steadily up until the end with a constant Correct article usage
the length
percentage
. Washing
Add an article
The washing
machine
was the highest from the start and ended up being at the bottom. Refrigerator
began by being the least and ended Correct article usage
The refrigerator
being
at the top Change preposition
up being
together with
the vacuum
cleaner. Hours from the start were high and decreased till the end.
In 1920 all household gadgets had an increase from the start, with the refrigerator
began
at 0%, Wrong verb form
beginning
vacuum
cleaner was second with
30% and the highest was the washing Change preposition
at
machine
at 40%. While
they all continue to rise in percentage
, the washing machine
had a slight drop in 1980 where
it had a Correct word choice
when
percentage
of almost 62. It picked up till tear 2019 where it finally
ended at around 72%. The refrigerator
and vacuum
cleaner ended up being ties
with a constant Wrong verb form
tied
percentage
of 100% till the end of 2019.
The hours used per week were 50 in 1920 and continued to fall till 1980 where
they were about 15. They Correct word choice
when
remain
constant till 2000 and Wrong verb form
remained
finally
in 2019 they slightly dropped again to 10 hours per week.Add a comma
finally,
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words machine, refrigerator, vacuum, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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