Write a letter to your friend who wants to visit your hometown. In your letter say • When is the best time to visit • Recommend someplace to stay • Invite her/him to your house

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Dear Aman, I hope you are doing well with the new job in the new city. I just got your letter and you wrote that you have settled down in a house, which is close to work. Now, as everything is sorted, why don't you come to visit me

this

summer? As you know Canadian summers are the most happening time with lots of activities and

gathering

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gatherings

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. Here in

Sarnia

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Sarnia,

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we have a Canada

day

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Day

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prade

Correct your spelling

parade

Centanial

Correct your spelling

Centennial

Park where people gather to celebrate with live music, food and games.

Also

, we have Victoria

day

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Day

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celebrations and dinner parties for

thanks giving

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thanksgiving

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. We can stay in a hotel near

St.

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the St.

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Clair

river

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River

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and enjoy fireworks from there. I would like to invite you to my house for a dinner party. It will be a small gathering of close family and friends to celebrate my

parents

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parent's

parents'

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anniversary. We will refresh our childhood memories and relive those good old days. Write

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to me

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when you finalise the dates. I am eagerly waiting for you. Yours lovingly, Amar

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spelling

Ensure consistency in the spelling and capitalisation of proper nouns, such as 'Canada Day Parade' and 'Centennial Park'.

clarity

Add specific details about the timing of festivities to give a clearer picture of the best time to visit.

tone

The tone of the letter is friendly and inviting, which suits a letter to a friend.

content

The letter covers all the required points: best time to visit, recommendations for accommodation, and an invitation.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

174 words

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