Write a letter to your friend who wants to visit your hometown. In your letter say • When is the best time to visit • Recommend someplace to stay • Invite her/him to your house

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Dear Aman, I hope you are doing well with the new job in the new city. I just got your letter and you wrote that you have settled down in a house, which is close to work. Now, as everything is sorted, why don't you come to visit me

this

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summer? As you know Canadian summers are the most happening time with lots of activities and

gathering

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gatherings

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. Here in

Sarnia

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Sarnia,

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we have a Canada

day

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Day

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prade

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parade

Centanial

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Centennial

Park where people gather to celebrate with live music, food and games.

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, we have Victoria

day

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Day

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celebrations and dinner parties for

thanks giving

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thanksgiving

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. We can stay in a hotel near

St.

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the St.

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Clair

river

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River

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and enjoy fireworks from there. I would like to invite you to my house for a dinner party. It will be a small gathering of close family and friends to celebrate my

parents

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parent's

parents'

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anniversary. We will refresh our childhood memories and relive those good old days. Write

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to me

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when you finalise the dates. I am eagerly waiting for you. Yours lovingly, Amar

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spelling

Ensure consistency in the spelling and capitalisation of proper nouns, such as 'Canada Day Parade' and 'Centennial Park'.

clarity

Add specific details about the timing of festivities to give a clearer picture of the best time to visit.

tone

The tone of the letter is friendly and inviting, which suits a letter to a friend.

content

The letter covers all the required points: best time to visit, recommendations for accommodation, and an invitation.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

174 words

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Write a letter to your friend who wants to visit your hometown. In your letter say • When is the best time to visit • Recommend someplace to stay • Invite her/him to your house

Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal while some people believe that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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