The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
The two maps highlight an
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sector in the town of Norbiton present today and Correct your spelling
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Overall
, it can be seen that the industrial sector of Norbiton will be updated including more houses and buildings.
To begin
with , to the north of the river
, currently there is farmland which will be replaced by a housing society. Maps also
show that a new road across the river
will be constructed for people. To the south of the river
, there is a chain of factories in future it will be replaced by houses.
Furthermore
, factories in the west of the stream will be replaced by shops . A medical centre and playing area for children will be established to the south of the river
. Additionally
, a factory on the south-east side of the river
would replaced by a teaching centre.Farmland will be constructed to the southeast of the estuary. Finally
, the street will split into three ways to provide facilities for peoSubmitted by mianraza686 on
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