The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
bar chart illustrates the total number of trips made by children
in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using various kinds of transport. There are 5 transportations: car
passenger, walking, cycling, walking and bus
, and only bus
.
Overall
in 1990, most of the children
went to
trip only by walk. More than 12 Change preposition
on to
million
children
walked to and from school. However
in 2010, around 11 Add a comma
However,
million
children
went to trip
by Change preposition
on trips
car
.
In 1990, walking was the most popular way to travel and using bus
, cycling, walking and bus
, and car
followed orderly. The figure of
moving by Change preposition
for
car
was only little
bit more than 4 Correct article usage
a little
million
which recorded the lowest in 1990 statistics. In contrast
, the number of trips with
Change preposition
by
car
in 2010 was the highest. In addition
, walking, bus
, walking and bus
, and cycling followed next. Only 2 million
children
went to
trip by cycling in 2010 which is shown the lowest in Change preposition
on to
whole
graph.Change the article
the whole
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