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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. what are the reasons for it? how can people research this/

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Some
people
 are interested in knowing about the story behind the
house
 they live in or the building that they purchased. There could be so many reasons why they pick up various methods to investigate
such
 issues, some do it just to satisfy their curiosity
while
 others take caution and care about safety matters. First of all, humans like to know things, they are curious
in
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about
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 nature and seek for advantage. When they choose a place to live they build up so many questions in their mind and will not settle down until they find the answer.
For instance
, they want to know who were the previous inhabitants, what the building was used for etc.
Secondly
, humans always avoid possible dangers. In fact, they tend to stay away from what may harm them. So,
people
 would like to check out the history of the place they have selected for living in order to be sure about safety issues.
Additionally
, there are so many ways for
people
 to find out about their
house
 history.
People
 usually do field research. One way is asking
neighbors
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 about what they know. In most of the cases, the information will be reliable and valuable. Another way which can ensure
you
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the security and safety of the
house
 is to check the records of the
house
 or building you bought from
local
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the local
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 police. If there is anything, which is worth
to be taken
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taking
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 into account, it will be given to you. In conclusion, It is interesting for everybody to know about the history of where they reside, and sometimes knowing about it can be so informative and save you from upcoming dangers.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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