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Some people believe that all children should learn second language from the time they start school, while others believe that it is better to wait until a child is at secondary school. Discuss both views and give Your opinion.

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Now days
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 studying
second
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language
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 some people believe that children should catch up
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 trend and learn a
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language
 at
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 age ,
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 the idea that
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kids should wait until secondary school to have
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language
.
This
 essay will discuss both sides and explain why I agree with the first statement.
To begin
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 young learners have more passion and excitement to learn ,
for
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 children ask
lot
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 of questions and want to know everything around them , but when they are growing up
theire
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their
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 love for learning
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 and become less interested.
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 putting a lot of subjects
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 might
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 him and prevent him from
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. In
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 I believe both sides of the
arguments
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 have merits,
however
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overall
 I think the advantages of learning
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language
 at elementary schools outweigh the disadvantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bilingualism
  • cognitive development
  • neuroplasticity
  • linguistic acquisition
  • multicultural competence
  • secondary language proficiency
  • core curriculum
  • language immersion
  • academic achievement
  • maturation
  • pedagogy
  • globalization
  • language pedagogy
  • retention rates
  • cultural enrichment
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