The pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

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The figures illustrate many steps to produce tomato

ketchup

. As can be seen, there are 15 stages, beginning with picking

tomatoes

on the farmland to serve as additional food.

The first step is

that the

tomatoes

are picked, and

then

they are put in a basket by farmers. After that, the

tomatoes

are sorted and separated between good and bad qualities. Once the

tomatoes

have been sorted, they are

then

sent to the factory by pick-up. Following that, every tomato is removed

such

as stalk, seeds, and skin,

then

they are collected in the container. After being collected, they are

then

crushed until liquid.

Moreover

, add some materials consisting of sugar, vinegar, and salt. Before being left for two hours, they are boiled and after that, the

ketchup

is entered into a bottle.

Subsequently

, before being quality control, the

ketchup

is given

labeling

Change the spelling

labelling

show examples

. When the

ketchup

is entered into the box, it is sent to the supermarket. In the

last

stages, the

ketchup

is already used to add some dishes.

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introduction/conclusion

Consider including a brief conclusion to wrap up your essay and restate the main points.

logical structure

Make sure each paragraph clearly focuses on one main idea to improve logical flow.

clear comprehensive ideas

Rephrase some sentences to improve clarity. For example, 'After being collected, they are then crushed until liquid' could be 'After collection, they are crushed into a liquid form.'

supported main points

You have identified the main stages of the tomato ketchup production process.

logical structure

Good use of sequencing words like 'first step,' 'after that,' and 'subsequently' to outline the process.

Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

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Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

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In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

170 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

harvesting
ripe
sorting
washing
crushing
paste
cooking
ingredients
sugar
vinegar
spices
flavor
bottling
sterilized
labeling
distribution
packing
transport
retailers

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The pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

Include an introduction and conclusion

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