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The line graph below shows the amount of Flamingos, Black Bean Pelicans, and Kingfishers counted at Bharatpur Bird Sanctuary between 2001 and 2014.

The line graph below shows the amount of Flamingos, Black Bean Pelicans, and Kingfishers counted at Bharatpur Bird Sanctuary between 2001 and 2014.
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The given line graph provided data about
whole
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number
 of
birds
 (
kingfisher
, black
beak
pelican
, flamingo) in
thousands
 at Bharatpur
bird sanctuary
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Bird Sanctuary
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 from 2001 until 2014. As observed, there were no overtakes by any figure of
birds
.
However
,
digits
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the digits
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 of
kingfisher
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the kingfisher
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 and black
beak
pelican
 faced upsurges at the same time.
Additionally
,
number
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 of
flamingos
 experienced more fluctuation compared to
other
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the other
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 two types of
birds
 at
sanctuary
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the sanctuary
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. At first in 2001, despite
quantity
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the quantity
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 of
kingfisher
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kingfishers
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was
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 the majority, black
beak
pelican
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pelicans
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 and the former predominant one went through a steady upturn, which caused growth
in
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of
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 six
thousands
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thousand
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of
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birds
 for each of them during 4 years.
While
value
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the value
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 of
kingfisher
 stayed constant
in
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from
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 2005
continued
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to 2008,
number
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a number
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 of
black
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beak
pelican
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pelicans
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 dropped slightly by a thousand
birds
 at those exact times.
Moreover
,
last
 6 years
kingfisher’s
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kingfishers
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number
 grew by three
thousands
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thousand
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of
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birds
 and black
beak
 pelicans
upgraded
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increased
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 in
number
 by three times less
than
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that
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apply
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. Integer of
flamingos
 stayed
same
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the same
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 during
first
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the first
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 2 years
that was
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,
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 approximately half
thousand
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a thousand
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. After that, it picked up to four
thousands
 of
flamingos
 until 2008.
Then
, digit of
flamingos
 rose a bit to almost five
thousands
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, birds, kingfisher, beak, pelican, thousands, flamingos with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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