The line graph shows the cost for watching films. The pie charts show the shift in the percentage of market share among the three types.
The given two graphs show the cost of watching films among three types: cinema tickets, DVDs, and legal downloads between 2005 and 2011.
Overall
, there was a huge increase in the legal download sector from Linking Words
one twentieth
to 56% in 6 years. In 2005, renting DVDs consisted of almost 60%, Add a hyphen
one-twentieth
however
, Linking Words
this
amount declined to nearly a quarter by 2011. The cost of cinema tickets changed from nearly Linking Words
one third
to approximately Add a hyphen
one-third
one fifth
over these six years.
Compared to the renting DVD segment, the percentage for going to the cinema decreased slightly—by only 18%. Add a hyphen
one-fifth
On the other hand
, renting DVDs dropped from 59% to around a quarter.Linking Words
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