You use public trasnport and have been facing issues. Write a letter to the public transport autoroties. In your letter include: why public transport is important to you what problem you face suggest what can be done to improve public transport
Dear Sir ,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I am not satisfied with your bus
service .
My name is Roopkamal kaur
, and I commute to my workplace through Change the capitalization
Kaur
bus
number 365 . In my street, only 365 number bus
comes
and go through all areas . I depend only on Correct subject-verb agreement
come
this
bus
because rest
of the buses are located far from my house .
Nowadays , most of the time when I Correct article usage
the rest
about
to take Add a missing verb
am about
bus
in the morning sharp 9 am Add an article
the bus
a bus
then
Correct your spelling
the
bus
usually comes late . It has been six days straight that
I Correct word choice
since
am arriving
late at my workplace . Sometimes , buses are full so Wrong verb form
arrived
i
wait another 10 minutes for Change the capitalization
I
next
Correct article usage
the next
bus
.
I would like you to take this
problem seriously and provide more bus
services so that every passenger can get seat
. Add an article
a seat
Beside
Replace the word
Besides
this
, app
should Correct article usage
an app
be design
in order to notify passengers . Please contact me if you have any questions .
I look forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Roopkamal KaurChange the verb form
be designed
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task achievement
While your letter conveys the important points, ensure to check for grammatical errors and punctuation, such as changing 'i' to 'I' and using commas correctly. Simplifying sentences can enhance clarity and coherence.
coherence and cohesion
Using cohesive devices like 'therefore,' 'however,' and 'furthermore' can help make the letter flow more smoothly. Ensure each paragraph links logically to the next.
task achievement
The letter includes all required components: the importance of public transport, the problem faced, and suggestions for improvement.
coherence and cohesion
The opening and closing of the letter are appropriate and courteous, suitable for a formal letter of this nature.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.