The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011.

The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011.
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The table provides data on the number of
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from five European countries living in each other's countries in 2011.
Overall
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. the number of
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from Poland accounts for the highest.
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, the number of folks folks from Spanish made of the lowest. Looking at the table more closely, 297.00
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from Germany lived in British, followed by Spanish, Italian and Polish, with 196.000
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living in Spanish, 42.000
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living in Italia and 4.400
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living in Polish.
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, 170
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from Spain live in Polisch, followed by 19.000
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living in Italia. 71.000
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living in the UK and 112.000
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living in Germany. In conclusion, folks from all countries lived in different nations in 2011.
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