The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch  television in Canada in two different years.

Summarise the information by selecting and  reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two pie charts provide information about the percentages of
adults
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using different devices to watch TV in Canada in the years 2009 and 2019.
Overall
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, at the beginning of the
period
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, the
rate
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of
adults
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watching TV on conventional televisions was the highest,
while
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tablets had the lowest
rate
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. In 2009, the
rate
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of
adults
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watching conventional TV was 34%, which stayed at the lowest
rate
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of 4% by the end of the
period
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.
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, at the beginning of the
period
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, the rates of
adults
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watching on laptops and desktop computers were 20% and 18%, respectively. By 2019, the percentage of
adults
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watching on laptops and desktop computers decreased slightly to 12% each. The
rate
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of people watching on tablets was the lowest at 5% in 2009 but became the third most-used device by the end of the
period
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. In 2009, the rates of
adults
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watching on mobile phones and flat-screen TVs were 15% and 8%, respectively. By 2019, the rates of
adults
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watching on mobile phones and flat-screen TVs were the highest at around 27% each.
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