The charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of
time
that working adults spent on various activities in a particular country between 1958 and 2008.
In 1958, adults spent the largest portion of their time
working (33%), followed closely by sleeping (32%). Socializing with friends and family accounted for 19% of their time
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relaxing at home and engaging in other interests or sports comprised 8% and 6% respectively. Commuting to work was the least time
-consuming activity, at just 2%.
By 2008, there were notable changes. The time
spent working increased significantly to 42%, making it the most dominant activity. Sleeping time
decreased to 25%, and socializing with friends and family saw a sharp decline to 6%. Conversely
, time
spent relaxing at home rose to 13%, and time
dedicated to other interests or sports increased to 8%. Travel to work also
saw a significant rise, reaching 8%.
Overall
, the data shows a shift towards more time
spent working and less time
on personal and social activities over the fifty-year period.Submitted by Nghỉ hè vui vẻ cả nhà on
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