The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. Summarize this information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The line graph and table illustrate the average monthly
temperatures
and annual sunshine hours
for three major cities: London
, New York
, and Sydney
.
Overall
, temperatures
in London
and New York
are low in the early months of the year, rising until July and then
decreasing again by December
. In contrast
, Sydney
experiences high temperatures
at the beginning of the year, which decline until July and then
increase again towards December
.
In detail, New York
's temperatures
range from around 5°C
in January to a peak of approximately 30°C
in July, before dropping back to around 5°C
in December
. Similarly
, London
starts with temperatures
around 10°C
, reaching their highest in July and August, and returning to approximately 10°C
by December
. Sydney
, on the other hand
, starts the year with the highest temperature of around 25°C
in January, drops to the lowest temperature of around 15°C
in July, and then
rises again from August onwards.
Regarding annual sunshine hours
, London
receives the least with 1,180 hours
, while
both New York
and Sydney
receive over 2,000 hours
, with New York
slightly higher at 2,535 hours
compared to Sydney
's 2,473 hours
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