The table below shows the results of surveys in 2005, 2010 and 2015 about McGill University. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makecomparisons where relevant
The information above illustrates the outcome of surveys in different
years
(2005, 2010, 2015) about McGill University.
Overall
, the numbers have stayed the same for Library resources only decreased
by 1 in 2015, as for sports and social facilities they Wrong verb form
decreasing
also
stayed the same over the years
. Moreover
, all the other aspects of the tables have gotten better numbers-wise over the years
, however
, the Range of modules offered has decreased.
Furthermore
, the teaching quality has increased steadily over the years
going from 74 in 2005 to 78 in 2015, on the other hand
, student services have tremendously improved going from 54 in 2005 to 95 in 2015. Lastly
, Range
of modules has declined drastically and it went from 39 in 2005 to 25 in 2015Correct article usage
the Range
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