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Being able to speak a foreign language is an advantage these days. Some people think that children should start learning a foreign language at primary school, while others think children should begin in secondary school. Discuss both sides and give your opinio

#language #advantage #people #children #school #opinio
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advancement
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 in technology, the education system has
also
 revolutionised which eventually has changed the demands of
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the job
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 market as well. Knowing more than
one
language
 for communication is always good. Some people are of the opinion that new languages should be introduced earlier
whereas
 others believe that
it
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 should be taught in secondary classes.
This
 essay will discuss both sides and
then
 give
opinion
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an opinion
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. Introducing an idea or concept early always has its advantages.
Similarly
, adding any
one
 foreign
language
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 their daily life will make it easier for young kids to internalise the lingo. Research has shown that learning any
language
 at a younger age a actually easier for students, versus waiting until high school. In
majority
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the majority
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 of the South Asian households, 85
percent
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per cent
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 of them have a mother tongue than the official
language
 of the country. It could be Punjabi, Sindhi or
Gujrati
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Gujarati
. They would not know how to write the script of it, but verbally every child is fluent. On the other side, getting to know a
language
 at
secondary
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a secondary
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 level means
one
 has made a conscious decision
of learning
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to learn
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 it. Learning a
second,
third or even
a
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apply
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fourth
language
 not only expands your mind , but it sets the pace for a better lifestyle.
One
 could
scrore
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score
 a meaningful position in the workplace, get
inntothe
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into the
 college of your dreams,
connect
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and connect
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 with people abroad among other things. Studies show that there are many cognitive benefits of learning a new
language
such
 as increased memory,
stringer
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stronger
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 mental agility and improved multitasking skills. In conclusion, learning new languages has only pros in all facets of life. The decision of when to learn can vary from
one
 person to another. In my opinion,
earlier
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 the start, the better it is for
one self
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oneself
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.
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grammar
Ensure precise grammar and spelling throughout the essay to avoid small inaccuracies (e.g., 'a actually' instead of 'is actually,' 'Gujrati' instead of 'Gujarati,' 'scrore' instead of 'score,' 'inntothe' instead of 'into the').
example
Support your arguments with more precise and detailed examples to strengthen your points and make them more convincing (e.g., specific benefits of learning languages early in primary school).
argument
Make sure to fully explore the disadvantages or counter-arguments to provide a balanced discussion. This will help in presenting a more comprehensive analysis.
organization
The essay has a clear introduction and conclusion that effectively frame the discussion.
organization
The main points are logically structured and discussed on both sides of the argument.
content
The essay provides clear reasoning and explanations for the benefits of learning a foreign language at different stages of education.

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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