The diagram below showthe coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps illustrate Seaville, where was the coastal village, in 2 various years( 1980 and 2010).

Overall

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, The number of not only people who live in

this

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district but

also

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facilities for passengers has increased.

However

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, it was crucial that the vegetation area

destroy

Wrong verb form

be destroyed

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According to

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the pictures, in the first year, we can see the equipment that travellers could use was a hotel, Holiday cottage, and tea room;

nevertheless

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, in the

last

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year the hotel was in

last

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place, but the holiday cottage moved to near East bank, which was in the same place in 2 times, and tea room replaced by

restaurant

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the restaurant

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;

furthermore

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, sound dunes, near the tea room, have been changing to the new hotel. The graphs demonstrate in 1980,

this

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region had a big area which did not have anything near the river ;

thereafter

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, in 2010, it was built a retirement village and boat club, that

was

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were

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the river beach

, .

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In addition

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, the woodland was altered to a golf course;

additionally

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, in 2010, we can see a massive residential zone

instead

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of an old holiday cottage and marsh.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

186 words

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The diagram below showthe coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

In many countries people have to pay for medical care, but some think that it should be a free service provided by the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

In many countries around the world, obesity is increasing, especially among children. One solution is to increase the tax on food and drinks which contain large amounts of sugar. How effective is this solution? What other measures would be effective?