The maps below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps give information about the comparison of the University
Sports
Centre's situation at the current time and its proposal development.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that there will be major changes in the university
sports
centre
Change noun form
centre's
show examples
future plans.
However
, reception, changing
room
, 25m swimming
pool
and seating will have not experienced any changes. In terms of the present map, there are three main parts of facilities consisting of a main building in the middle of two outdoor courts. Looking into more detail on the map, the Indoor building has a reception
room
in the south of the 25m swimming
pool
, before entering the
pool
there is an accessway through a changing
room
.
In addition
, there are seatings next right to the
pool
and gym facility on the north of the
pool
. Regarding the future plans map, the left outdoor court will be replaced by new amenities
such
as a leisure
pool
and a changing
room
is expected to be built on the south part of
this
pool
. Interestingly, more convenient places are set to be constructed in front of reception
such
as
sports
shop and cafe.
Similarly
, a
sports
hall is projected to be erected on the right outdoor court land,
then
there will be two dance studios to the east and a changing
room
. Notably, the gym facility is going to expand to the right to accommodate more visitors.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
Vocabulary: Replace the words sports, room, pool with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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