The maps below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps give information about the comparison of the University

Sports

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Centre's situation at the current time and its proposal development.

Overall

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, it can be clearly seen that there will be major changes in the university

sports

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centre

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centre's

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future plans.

However

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, reception, changing

room

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, 25m swimming

pool

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and seating will have not experienced any changes. In terms of the present map, there are three main parts of facilities consisting of a main building in the middle of two outdoor courts. Looking into more detail on the map, the Indoor building has a reception

room

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in the south of the 25m swimming

pool

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, before entering the

pool

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there is an accessway through a changing

room

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In addition

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, there are seatings next right to the

pool

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and gym facility on the north of the

pool

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. Regarding the future plans map, the left outdoor court will be replaced by new amenities

such

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as a leisure

pool

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and a changing

room

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is expected to be built on the south part of

this

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pool

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. Interestingly, more convenient places are set to be constructed in front of reception

such

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sports

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shop and cafe.

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, a

sports

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hall is projected to be erected on the right outdoor court land,

then

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there will be two dance studios to the east and a changing

room

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. Notably, the gym facility is going to expand to the right to accommodate more visitors.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sports, room, pool with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

233 words

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