Some governments say how many children a family can hare in their country. They may control the number of children someone has through taxes. It is sometimes necessary and right for a government to control the population in this way. Do you agree or disagree?

Some

countries

in the world have a higher

number

of people and in other

countries

is not the same case because governments say how many

children

a family can

hare

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have

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in their country. They may control the

number

of

children

someone has through taxes. some people suppose that It is sometimes necessary and right for a

government

to control the population in

this

way. In my opinion, it is a necessary action from the

government

for some reasons.

Firstly

, in some

countries

, the

number

of poor people is higher and they

not

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do not

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have the money to buy products for their life because

in

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, in

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one

family , the

number

of

children

is more than 3.

Then

, the budget of the family is less than the real budget for

baying

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buying

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products and

services

.

Such

Arabic

countries

, the

number

of

children

is high and

parents

have

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do have

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not the money

for buying

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to buy

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the products and

services

to

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for

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theses

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these

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children

.

Secondly

, in these

countries

how

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where

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the

number

of

children

is higher, the

government

have

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does have

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not the possibility to help all the families to grow their

children

. It is difficult to help them

in

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with

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the cost of educational and medical

services

.

Such some

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Some

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countries

in Africa have the

poor

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poorest

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educational and medical

services

in the world because the

government

have

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does have

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not the capacity to help all

children

in these contexts.

Finally

, if the

parents

want their

children

have

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to have

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job

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a job

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in the future and the

government

help

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helps

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them

about

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with

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this

subject, it

supposes

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is supposed

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to have

one

or two

children

.

Such

JAPAN, all families have not more

2

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than 2

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children

. The

parents

and the governments

garanti for

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guarantee

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these

children

a high lifestyle.

For

this

reason, it is the

countries

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country's

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number

one

in the world. In sum, the decision to have a child

depend

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depends

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on the capacity of the

parents

to make a high lifestyle for

this

child. It is logical to have

one

or 2

children

only.

Besides

, it is a signal for the growth

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and

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development of their country.