Some people say that children should start learning a foreign languathge when they are 7 years old, but other believe that they should start when they are 18 years old. discuss both views and write your own opinion.
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the number
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to start studying foreign
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a foreign
language
. While
some people agree that it should be taught when they are adult
around 18 years old, I side with those who feel that they should commit to Fix the agreement mistake
adults
learn
when they are 7.
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learning
children
are growing up to be teenager
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teenagers
they
will be so many activities in school. Correct pronoun usage
there
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, they should join club
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clubs
learning
other subjects required by their senior high school. The Wrong verb form
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children
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have
difficult
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they are joining many activities alogside
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alongside
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, in learning language
, they should memorize, Correct article usage
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and implement
to
their lives and many of them will Change preposition
in
feel
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find it
On the other hand
, children
at 7 can be considered as golden
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a golden
age
that
they will absorb many new things easily. At Correct word choice
when
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age
, the sense of their curiosity is higher during their lifetime. They tend to Add a missing verb
be interest
interest
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interested
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something new, Change preposition
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this
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a new
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, they will have good
spirit Correct article usage
a good
at incorporated
everything they have learned.
In conclusion, learning Change preposition
to incorporate
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a new
language
at their golden age
will beneficial
to their life when it is taught early when they are in their peak of learning. I, Add a missing verb
be beneficial
therefore
, remain firmly convinced that kids should be learnt
many Correct your spelling
learn
languanges
as young as they are.Correct your spelling
languages
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