The table below shows the results of surveys in 2005, 2010 and 2015 about McGill University. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makecomparisons where relevant

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The table illustrates the outcome of the survey in three years ,in 2005,2010 and 2015 at McGill University.

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with, there are five different sectors

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the results of 3 different years in percentage ,in teaching quality,library resources,Student Services,Range of modules offered and Sports and social facilities.

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, in 2005 the Teaching quality results were seventy-four per cent

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in 2010 declined by 2 participants,but in 2015 the number of participants increased to 78%.Coming to Library resources which is the highest evaluation from all other sectors,in 2005 they got eighty-six

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gradually increased in 2010 by 2%,but in 2015 they decreased by one per cent.

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,the outcome in Student services was 54%,in 2010 and 2015 they gradually inclined up to 95%.

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was taken,in 2005 was thirty-nine

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which decreased by 8% in 2010,but in 2015 became worse and

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went down by six per cent.The final section is Sports and social facilities which in 2005 ,2010 and 2015 was exactly the same, 65%.

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rating was in

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Library

resources and the

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lowest

was the Range of modules offered.

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