The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table gives details about the police budget in a particular area in Britain for 2017 and 2018 and pie charts illustrate where
money
is handed out at the same time and location. Overall
, the most budget was gotten by the National Government in 2017 and 2018 and the most money
was spent on salaries in the two same years.
As can be seen, in 2017 the total money
that was dedicated to the Police budget was £ 304.7 m
which includes £ 175.5 m
from the National Government. In 2018, the amount of money
that was given from Local Taxes was £ 102.3 m
which is £ 10 m
more than in the last
year on the same source.
On the other hand
, the percentage of money
that was distributed to Salaries decreased from 75% to 65% and 6% was put on Technology which reached to
14% in 2018. Change preposition
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Finally
amount of money
was
handed out for Building and transport remained unchanged in 2017 and 2018.Unnecessary verb
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