In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

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before attending a university or getting employment experience? It's common knowledge that having your parents push you to attend

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after high

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offers some

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, but it

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has

drawbacks

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essay will examine the

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and

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of young people working or

traveling

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for a

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between high

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graduation

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and

college

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enrollment, and it will do so in a rational manner. On the

one

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hand, proponents assert that there are many

benefits

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to taking a

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off between high

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and

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.

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youth learn from their mistakes as they gain experience in handling real-world issues that customers in restaurants and retail deal with on a daily basis.

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since they already have

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, families don't have to worry about income or pocket

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for their kids.

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,

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of the best things for the unspoken future may be saving

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. What if,

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,

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of the

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had a final assignment at university that could be completed 50/50?

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, families don't need to worry about buying everyday university attire.

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, Younge who does a part-time job can buy clothing for

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following academic phase. The fact that having a job after high

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helps their family is

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of the key

benefits

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. They may save

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for their younger brothers who are still in high

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thanks to it as well. That's why finding employment after

graduation

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is crucial. Opponents,

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, contend that working after

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has some

drawbacks

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of these

drawbacks

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is that young people tend to prioritize earning

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over their education, leading many to drop out of

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. They no longer have time for their family, which is another drawback. They

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lose track of how to study and resume their studies.

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, doctors lose their ability to study when they graduate from

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and begin working at a younger age. Since both parties save

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, I believe there are more

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than

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to

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challenges in life. In summary, there are

benefits

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and

drawbacks

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to encouraging young people to work or travel for a

year

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in

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between high

school

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graduation

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and

college

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enrollment.

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, I think that there are more

benefits

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than

drawbacks

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to taking a gap

year

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or working a

year

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.