You recently attended training course for your work. Your employer has asked you for your feedback on the training course Write a letter to your employer. In your letter - remind your employer what the course was about - explain why the course was useful to you in your work - suggest why the course may not be suitable for some your other colleagues

Dear Mr. Brown, I'm

delightful

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to write

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letter to you to share my experience with

regards

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to training that was organised by the Talent Acquisition

Department

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of our company. It was a week

training

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of training

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to work with

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the Secured

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Personal

Loan

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Department

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to explore the underwriting process of

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the Loan

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loan

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department

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. I

am

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have been

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working in the Unsecured

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Department

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since

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last

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two years, and I have proficient knowledge of how to deal with

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apply

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unsecured

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applications. As you probably know

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apply

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I have a keen interest

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in working

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in the Secured

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section. So,

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training opportunity helped me a lot to have a close look at their work; what are the different documents than unsecured

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, the secured

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section employees review in a

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application;

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and what

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type of exceptions they

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while

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approving a

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. I'm sure, in the near future,

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knowledge will really help me to successfully clear the interview

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when any opportunity comes up in the secured

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division.

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, I realized that

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training has not proven useful for

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employees who are not interested in

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field. I will suggest that the Talent Acquisition Team

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create a platform where they can know about each employee's interest

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and

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set up some training programs in the different departments around the company as per each employee's skills and interests. Best Regards, Alicia Liberty