The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006.
The bar graph represents the global
sales
of a
four different types of digital Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
games
: Mobil phone games
, Online games
, Console games
, and Handheld games
, over a 7 years
period between 2000 Correct your spelling
7-year
to
2006 indicated in billions of Correct word choice
and
dollars
.
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that console games
' revenue underwent a downward trend, whereas
that of the other threes
experienced an upward trend throughout the given time frame. Fix the agreement mistake
three
However
, it is interesting to note that the popularity of a handheld one
To begin
with, in 2000, at around 11 billion
dollars
, Correct article usage
the Hanheld
Hanheld
Correct your spelling
Handheld
game
was the highest sales
among all four category
of Change to a plural noun
categories
games
, followed by console game
at just below 6 Fix the agreement mistake
games
billion
dollars
, respectively. In 2001, silmilar
figures Correct your spelling
similar
of
the aforementioned Change preposition
for
game
, except the
introduction of an online Change preposition
for the
game
at about 1 billion
dollars
. Then
, a following year later, Mobile
Add an article
the Mobile
game
was introduced and its new companion received the same rate of sale figures at approximately 2 billion
dollars
in 2002. Additionally
, while
handheld version earnings was
dramatically increased, Unnecessary verb
apply
the
console Correct article usage
apply
sales
was
slightly dropped.
From 2003 onwards, it is noticeable that the Change the verb form
were
sales
of a handheld
Correct the article-noun agreement
handheld games
a handheld game
games
constantly increased before reached
its Wrong verb form
reaching
peaked
at 17 Replace the word
peak
billion
dollars
in 2006, whereas
that of the console games
inclined with a constant rate at 3 billion
dollars
. The other two games
rise slowly before ending with less than 10 billion
dollars
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