The graph below shows prediction about the number of people who will study three major world languages between 2020 and 2030. summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparision where relevant.

The graph below shows prediction about the number of people who will study three major world languages between 2020 and 2030.

summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparision where relevant.
The graph illustrates predictions about how many people will study three major languages over a ten-year period between 2020 and 2030. In general, what stands out from the graph is that there will be a remarkable upward trend in the
number
of
students
of all three languages. Another interesting point is that it is predicted that the
number
of Mandarin
students
will take over Spanish
students
in 2026. Looking at the details, the
number
of English
students
will rise gradually from 550
million
to approximately 700
million
people until 2024, at which point it will dip down to around 650
million
in 2026. After that, the
number
will continue its moderate growth until it reaches 750
million
in 2030.
On the other hand
both Spanish and Mandarin
Students
will increase steadily each year from 200
million
and 100
million
to just under 500
million
and 550
million
respectively.
As it
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seems the
number
of Mandarin
students
is predicted to have a more rapid growth.
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