The graph below shows the number of visitors to three museums between 2000 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates how many people visited three museums over a five-year period between 2000 and 2005.
In general, what stands out from the graph is that the number of
visitors
to both the National museum
of China and MET Capitalize word
Museum
museum
in New York grew gradually, Capitalize word
Museum
while
the Edo museum
in Tokyo saw fluctuation over the period in question. Capitalize word
Museum
In addition
, the National museum
of China was the most popular Capitalize word
Museum
museum
in 2005.
According to
the figure, there was a gradual rise in visitors
to the National
from around 6 Replace the word
nation
million
to just under 16 million
visitors
during the period mentioned in the question. As for the MET, despite plunging from 12 million
to 6 million
in the first two years, the visitors
then
increased moderately each year until they reached over 14 million
people by 2005.
On the other hand
, the number of visitors
to Edo remained the same during
2000 to 2001, but saw Change preposition
from
fluctuation
Correct article usage
a fluctuation
around
8 Change preposition
of around
million
people for the next three years, at which point they increased to 10 million
visitors
in 2005.Submitted by bahram.azizzade on
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