The graph below shows the qatari import totals( in tons) for several types of vegetables from 1980 to 2020. The pie charts depict the total value of imports in Qatar for five varieties of vegetables for 3 distinct years from 1980 to 2020. Units are denoted in tones

The graph below shows the qatari import totals( in tons) for several types of vegetables from 1980 to 2020.

The pie charts depict the total value of imports in Qatar for five varieties of vegetables for 3 distinct years from 1980 to 2020. Units are denoted in tones
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import of five different vegetables between 1980 and 2020.
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, spinach had been the most imported vegetable until garlic took its place,
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broccoli had shown a significant rise over the years. Meanwhile, peas stayed constant not showing either an
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or decrease and maintaining their position in the class. Spinach had fluctuated over the years to almost 400
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in 2020 even though it hit its peak in 1980 accounting for over 400
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garlic showed an upward trend from over 200
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imported in 1980 to 400
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in 2020 showing a significant increase.
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broccoli import had risen in the meantime being the third vegetable
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imported the most. The lowest imported vegetable are the peas which over the years remained in the same position having under 200
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