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The table shows data about underground railway systems in siz major cities with data opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions.

The table shows data about underground railway systems in siz major cities with data opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions.
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The table illustrates information about
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underground
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railway
constructure
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construction
 in
London
, Paris,
Tokyo
, Washington DC, Kyoto,
los
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 Angeles in three categories.
Overall
, it is clear from the table that
London
 is the oldest one and
have
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 the longest route
tham
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than
 others,
while
Tokyo
have
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 the highest number of passengers per
year
.
London
have
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 the oldest rail station
that
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built in 1863, at the same point Paris and
Tokyo
 are the
owner
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 of the older
railway
system
 that
other
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 in
this
 table with constructed in 1900 and 1927, respectively.
London
also
have
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 the longest rail
system
 at just under 400
kilometres
.
On the other hand
,
Tokyo
have
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has
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 the most passengers per
year
 with 1927 , following that Paris is second most in
this
 category with
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approximately
 1200 passengers per
one
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year
.
Moreover
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 Los Angeles has the
uyoumgest
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largest
 underground
railway
system
 opened at
year
 2001 and Kyoto
has
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 the second
yong
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young
 rail station at the
year
 1981.
However
, Washington DC have the longest
kilometres
 of route with 126
kilometres
 ,
while
 Kyoto has the shortest distance
railway
system
 at just above 10
kilometres
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words railway, london, tokyo, year, system, kilometres with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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