The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with date opedend, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features making comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates information about underground railway construction in
London
, Paris, Tokyo
, Washington DC, Kyoto, Los
Angeles in three categories.
Correct word choice
and Los
Overall
, it is clear from the table that London
is the oldest one and has the longest route than others, while
Tokyo
has the highest number of passengers per stage.
London
has the oldest rail
station built in 1863, at the same point Paris and Tokyo
are the owners of the older track organization that others in this
table with constructed in 1900 and 1927, respectively. London
also
has the longest rail
rule at just under 400 kilometres
. On the other hand
, Tokyo
has the most passengers per time with 1927 , following that Paris is second most in this
category with approximately 1200 passengers per period.
Moreover
, Los Angeles has the largest underground line arrangement opened at age 2001 and Kyoto had the second young rail
station at the moment 1981. However
, Washington DC have the longest kilometres
of route with 126 kilometres
, while
Kyoto has the shortest distance rail
line structure at just above 10 kilometres
.Submitted by Kawasaki on
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