The graph below shows how elderly people in Europe spent their free time between 1980 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph gives information about the distribution of leisure time
activities
of elderly individuals in five different categories in Europe over a Use synonyms
period
of decade from 1980 to 2010.
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Overall
, it can be clearly seen that all various Linking Words
activities
showed an upward trend over the Use synonyms
period
with the exception of theatre. Interestingly, hiking became the most significant growth of the total Use synonyms
activities
.
At the beginning of the Use synonyms
period
, watching TV was the Use synonyms
top picked
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elderly activity at 60% and had a moderate increase by 10% in 2000 before dropping to around 65% in 2010. The figures for reading and hiking stood at 30% and 20%, consecutively in 1980. From Change preposition
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this
point onwards, reading fluctuated and saw a dramatic rise from 20% in 2000 to 60% in 2010, Linking Words
while
Hiking experienced a skyrocket to 80% in 2010.
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In contrast
, the number of theatres accounted for 50% of the total elderly Linking Words
activities
in 1980 and decreased rapidly by 20% in 1990 Use synonyms
thereafter
it rose regularly to 45% Linking Words
at the end
of the Linking Words
period
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