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The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average austraian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average austraian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
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There are two charts the first one illustrates how
average
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Austraian
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Australian
 household
use
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uses
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the
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energy
while
 the second shows the greenhouse
gas
emissions
 which come
as a result
 of
energy
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use
used
.Well,a lot of notable things can be observed.
Overall
,we can see that heating has the most proportion of
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use
while
 the most
energy
 that leads to
gas
emissions
 is water heating with 32% of the total greenhouse
gas
emissions
. On the one hand,heating
dominate
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on
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the
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Austraian
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Australian
 household
energy
 with
the
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a
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 proportion of 42%.
Morover
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Moreover
,cooling , lighting and refrigeration come
on
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at
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 the bottom of the list with 13%
compaind
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compound
compared
.
In
addition
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addition,
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 water heating
come
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comes
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 in
the
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second place with approximately 30%.
On the other hand
,there are
alot
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lot
 to observe on the greenhouse
gas
emissions
 which come
as a result
 of
Austraian
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Australian
 household
energy
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use
used
.First of all,lighting and cooling are
in
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at
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 the bottom of the list with
the
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a
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 proportion of 11%
compained
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combined
.
Furthermore
,refrigeration and heating have nearly the same percentage
although
heating
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the heating
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 was the most
energy
 that
have
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has
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 been used.
Finally
,water heating and other appliances are
in
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at
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 the top of the list with approximately the same percentage.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as a result, while".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, gas, emissions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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