Government of many countries had to impose a lockdown to control the Coronavirus pandemic. What were the advantages and disadvantages of this lockdown.Give eamples from your own experience

During the outbreak of coronavirus, high authorities

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severe nations had to shut down everything to stop the spreading of coronavirus.

Due to

this

, many individuals were able to save themselves from

this

deadly virus and were able to spend time with loved ones.

However

,

becaus eof

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because of

the

lockdown

people had to face financial issues and many of them lost their jobs. On

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brighter side, individuals were totally safe in their homes from the fatal virus because of the

lockdown

. The government took it very seriously

,

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when doctors mentioned that

this

virus can spread from

on

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human to another.

Therefore

, they

impoosed

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imposed

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shutdown in big countries like Canada, China, America and India.

As a result

, several families were protected because of

this

decision.

In addition

, as people were locked together under one roof, they were able to get plenty of time to spend together and strengthen their bond even

more

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stronger.

For instance

,

befor

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before

lockdown

me and my boyfriend used to work opposite shifts and we rarely used to see each other. But, during

lockdown

we both

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three months together and that period of time enhanced our relationship to a great extent. On

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darker side, people had to face money problems because they

were not allow

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to work. There were few businesses

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started work from home, but others

such

as restaurants, coffee shops, and shopping malls were closed and employees had no source of income.

Moreover

,

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of privately owned businesses went into debt. The reason was that

lockdown

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had stopped

import

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and export of products.

Along with

labour

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shortage, the companies became the

victim

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of bankruptcy. That caused

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lost

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of many jobs

as well as

financial troubles. In conclusion,

although

lockdown

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had

bad

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impact on individual's financial status and on their jobs, they all were able to surround themselves

around

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loved ones and in a safe environment.