An overseas friend has invited you to visit his country. You are planning to visit him. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • Thank him for the invitation and accept the invitation • Write details about your visit • Briefly describe what you want to do there.

Dear Gagan, Hope you're
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doing splendidly! I am writing
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you that
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I accept your request. First of all, thank you for inviting me to your place.
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been a hot minute since we caught up with each other. I
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last
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time we met, when you left India for your studies and since
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we
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just chatting on social media.
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, when I got your birthday invitation I was over the moon. I immediately talk to my parents and get permission to fly to Canada.
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, I would like to inform you that I booked my tickets for September 15, 2024. I will be at
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around 5:00am. I will call you once I will be there.
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some of the places on
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where
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I
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to visit
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, CN
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and local farms. After enjoying your birthday I want you to give me a tour of all spots. I'm really excited to meet you. See you soon buddy. Your friend, Raj
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task achievement
Provide a little more detail about activities to make your intentions clearer.
tone
The letter maintains a friendly and engaging tone throughout, appropriate for the intended recipient.
structure
The letter has a clear structure with separate paragraphs for each point.

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I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gratitude
  • excitement
  • itinerary
  • arrival
  • accommodation
  • transportation
  • local customs
  • landmarks
  • culinary delights
  • get-together
  • pack essentials
  • cultural norms
  • sightseeing
  • reunion
  • recommendations
  • invaluable experience
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