The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries for UK residents to visit

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The charts provide data on travel to and from the

between 1979 and 1999.

Overall

, visiting to and

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the

has experienced an upward trend over the given period. Notably, the number of British tourists overseas soared from around 1984 to 1999. Looking at the charts more closely, one can see that tourists from the

abroad rose by almost 7% point from 1979 to 1984 and soared by 32% point from 20% in 1984 to 53% in 1999.

Moreover

, visits to the

went up from approximately 10% in 1979 to nearly 28% in 1999.

In addition

, the most popular nation is France with more than 10 million, followed by Spain, the USA, Greece and Turkey. In conclusion, more and more people from different countries travel abroad over the 20-year period

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The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries for UK residents to visit

In many countries, the gap between the rich and poor is widening. What problems can this cause, and what solutions can you suggest?

Task 1 :The chats below show the percentage of students joining North West University.

We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people think that children who spend a lot of time reading children’s story book are wasting their time which could be better used doing other more useful activities. To what extend do you agree?