It has been suggested that primary children should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

A

school

of thought holds that

children

in primary

school

should be encouraged to learn how to plant vegetables and rear animals. From my perspective,

while

this

suggestion will bring both various benefits and drawbacks for the

students

, the positive influences of

this

practice are more significant. On the one hand,

this

activity can cause some harm

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the

children

. One of the primary reasons is that

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farming activities might involve some ingredients like soil, pesticides, and fertilizers, so if the

children

have little knowledge about how to do and deal with these components,

this

might cause their hands, clothes, and

school

equipment to become dirty or even cause poisoning.

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Moreover

, participants are likely to suffer some serious infectious diseases caused by inflicted animals, like ringworm.

As a

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some parents might worry about the safety and well-being of their

child

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that they will not agree to let them take part in these activities.

On the other hand

, it is obvious that

this

subject will lay the foundation for the comprehensive development of

students

.

Children

will have a chance to learn and understand the hard work required in farming. Growing vegetables and training

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cattle and poultry requires a large amount of work that can make people run out of energy, so when a child is actively involved in

this

process, they will have an appreciation for these foods and not

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waste them.

Furthermore

,

this

is

also

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paramount importance for the attention and care of the

students

for nature. They will learn to protect and be grateful to the trees and animals rather than demolishing or hurting them. In conclusion,

although

the disadvantages are clearly to negatively affect the

children

, in the near future, the advantages seem to outweigh

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.

Thus

, it is advisable that the

school

should have an obvious strategy for

this

subject and provide a safe and enriching learning experience for their

students

.